Room 1 have been working very hard on their pieces of writing over the last two weeks. They have tried a new approach to writing of using a model as a guide, analysing it to see what makes it a good piece of writing and then creating a criteria to work from.
Please enjoy reading our 'Remember Summer' writing and leave a comment, we love feedback!
Kia ora Room1. Great summer memories you have shared here. I got a real taste of your adventures. Thanks for sharing your writing. What will you do next? Ngā mihi!
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